EclipseAg said:
Dialog things that bug me:
1. Characters who make plans without any details. Guy asks girl, "Dinner tomorrow night?" Girl answers "Sure" and walks away or hangs up.
2. Characters who are asked a basic question that would help explain their actions and they either refuse to answer or do so in a convoluted manner that makes things worse. This happens a lot in romcoms to set up the conflict between the lovers that is inevitably solved in the third act.
It's kinda old-school but there used to be a lot of situations where a character would say "Turn on your TV" and the news item or show in question was always just starting. Perfect timing!
On your last point, guy in bar watching news sees news of event or person of interest is spotted....and yes, it is the "perfect timing" issue. Sometimes "Hey turn it up!" is yelled.
Interestingly, most the establishments I'm in don't actually have local news on anymore, or at least not since ESPN came out.